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From Summer 2002:

The Peacock's Eye - Robert Klein Engler
Penetration - Steven M Glabman
Just Mackin' at You - Love Poems by Party Calvin and Friends
Lot Of My Sister - Alison Stine





The Peacock's Eye
a story by Robert Klein Engler

Alphabeta Press, 1999. $10


Robert Klein Engler lives in Chicago and New Orleans. He holds degrees from the University of Illinois at Urbana and The University of Chicago Divinity School. He was a department chair for many years at the City Colleges of Chicago until he was banned by the Chancellor in May,1997. He now teaches at Roosevelt University. His poems and stories have appeared in Borderlands, Hyphen, Christopher Street, The James White Review, American Letters and Commentary, Kansas Quarterly, and many other magazines and journals. He was the recipient of Illinois Arts Council Literary Awards for his poem "Flower Festival at Genzano," which appeared in Whetstone and "Three Poems for Kabbalah," which appeared in Fish Stories, II. His books, Medicine Signs and Shore Line, among others, are available from from Alphabeta Press or amazon.com. Return to Alexander, a book of sonnets, is available from iUniverse.com.

The book, a novella, covers a young man's coming of age and coming out in India during a summer tour, while trying to escape the pain of unrequited love. I was particularly struck by the overly academic, archly superior western canon attitude from the main character during early descriptions of the country and people, becoming a gradual acceptance of the world that consumes colonizers.

The sex scenes seemed much too timid, but that's just my impression, besides, this isn't meant to be porn, more like a romance travelogue, more meditation than exploration of the turmoil of a young man's sexual awakening. The affair with the young black man from Detroit, though, falls back on the too-familiar air of the exotic, the stereotype of the white male going buck wild once seduced by the 'primitive' atmosphere of the third world, in this case the slums, squalor and timeless mystery of India, allowing him to lose inhibitions and learn the true meaning of love from the more sexually aggressive dark lover. But then, that's just my impression.

The familiar use of quotes at the beginning of the chapters, from sources as varied as the Bhagavad Gita, Fodor's, Carl Jung and Walt Whitman are an interesting touch, but slipping in the poem by Gloria Klein, even though it works in the book, seemed a little too cute.

You can contact Alphabeta Press at Suite 1801, 901 S. Plymouth, Chgo., IL., 60605, or email them at alphabpres@aol.com.





Penetration

Steven M Glabman

One Day Productions, 2001 (third printing). $3



Steven Glabman is a writer and visual artist, an insightful creator of visual anarchy as well as a charter member of the Unofficial Soup Kitchen, a global cyber-commune (his discussion forum there is called "There's A Garden In My Face"). He has been regularly featured at the Around the Coyote arts festival and his work has graced walls and screens at home and abroad.

This is a little book of poems by Glabman and drawings done by him and Dean DeVries scattered throughout; nice touch that you don't know which artist did what drawing. the book was first published in 1984, and I have to admit that it shows; Glabman's recent poems far outshine this early effort of sometimes oblique, stream-of-consciousness poems. The surrealism is forced here and there and the images conjured up don't always lead to a coherent whole, sometimes the metaphors don't completely connect. "Three years after riding the train" seemed to be a string of somewhat connected images thrown together:

 
  She slept sound.
Radio free ride, it was like
  Milk, standing unbalanced
And dark. Moments pass as
  In film noir trash and
Crossing lunch hours,
  Scenes become glib. Water
Rushes in a blued blur.
  Sentenced to ride, this
Train has abolished tracks.
  It's now space moving time
And distance shortened by
         Sleep.

I couldn't tell if "My Now House" was about experiencing an artists' house, or about an artist encountering a house; "Sad Sonnet" sounds like an obliquely referenced end to a relationship that wasn't there; I know what kind of political statement "No Thanks (giving)" was making, but it got lost in the jumble of clever metaphors:


Drink, drinka, drinkie.
                   Pottie.
          Pot dopes loop.
    Drown in chinese chicken.
  Takee outee.

Sack, sacra, sacrifice.
                 Now live life
           In splitter anger,
                 Nowhere
              Now here.
        Cancelled by overshelter
               Over rain
     Sad parade.
             Coming down hard
                   and now
Sad pain.

This is a cool book to trip on when you and a few friends are doing bong hits and have lounge music going in the background. Sometimes, that's all poetry needs to be.




Just Mackin' at You
Love Poems by Party Calvin and Friends

Poet Star Promotions, 2001. $7.50


Calvin Glaze, originally from Los Angeles, has been an active presence on the Chicago poetry scene for a number of years as well as a tireless chapbook publisher.

Mackin':
1) Rappin', talking smooth; a romantic expression of love, affection, passion, ardor;
2) Sexually stimulating slick talk;
3) The style affected by pimps to attract ho's.

The magazine format of Calvin's book allows for a broad use of satire along with the sentiment, and the obviously pasted together construction helps keep things light and entertaining. A very good selection of images are scattered throughout the book to accompany the poems, a hallmark of Glaze's design style.

The poems themselves are a decent mix - a poem about balls (art balls and the poet's balls); intellectual mackin' using very poetic language; "Big Rig" from Krystal Ashe, a cute play on words, substituting a semi truck for a penis, with the expected clever metaphors that come to mind (though it comes across better on the stage); a set of love letters from Ronald and Nancy Reagan (though I loathe the Reagans, and considered the letters very self-serving, name-dropping and congratulatory, the intentionally corny greeting card sentiments are definitely them); "Mira" by Reggie Gibson, a poem from his book Storms Beneath the Skin [previously reviewed in CTR]; a poem excerpted from the biblical Song of Solomon, an ancient love poem providing a contrast to the modern verse contained in the book; "Why I Write" by Pearl Cleage, a political love poem for her sisters and 'any brothers of good intentions who will take the time to listen'; and"My Neighborhood", Glaze's ode to an old pimp standing in front of a fleabag hotel:

He has seen it all, lived it all
Done it all
He has paid a price for it all
Ho's gone, dreams shattered
He is old, he is alone


In a commentary that closes the book, Calvin's believes that black men need to surrender to Christ to fix what's wrong in the 'hood, though i have my own perspective on the damage that religion, or the abuse of religion by purported spiritual leaders has wrought on the black community, even though it was by and large the only institution that could kickstart the civil rights movement. As an expression of love for the community, though, it's a nice touch.

Contact Calvin Glaze at Poet Star Promotions, 1512 N. LaSalle, Chgo., IL., 60610




Lot Of My Sister

Alison Stine

Kent State University Press, 2001. $?



Alison Stine was born in 1978, partially deaf because of congenital microcia. In 1999, at age 21, she became the first and only female undergraduate poet ever published by The Kenyon Review. She has received a Pushcart Prize nomination, honorable mention in The Atlantic Monthly Student Writing competition, and was a featured poet on Poetry Daily (www.poems.com). Her work has appeared in Crab Orchard Review and is upcoming in The Paris Review. In 2000, this chapbook was a winner of the Wick Prize. Her plays and musicals have been performed at the University of Nebraska, The Cleveland Playhouse, and Off-Broadway at the Trilogy Theatre Group. A teacher at Denison University Reynolds Writers' Workshop and at the University of Maryland (where she is an MFA candidate), she lives outside of Washington, D.C., and dates the best drummer in the city.

I like the way her poems create a depth of experience through the telling, quiet details that here and there convey a wealth of information and feeling. There's a great deal going on between the lines; you have to read the poems a second and a third time to get the full bouquet of memory and experience.

There's an identification with people not deemed 'normal', but the poems are not strident p.c. anthems. These are personal poems; thoughtful, tapping emotions instead of exploiting them for impact - stripping a porch and remembering fragments of a relationship; an excellent short piece of a doctor in the wilderness having a biopsy of her breast as her mind wanders to Rembrandt and his mistress, who also had breast cancer; a cool poem to hair, natural and lost; a poem of silent sounds, unsaid words between a couple in the middle of the night:

I am giving you smiles of feigned comprehension.
I am wondering where inside me your missed

sentences, misunderstood words have hid. Angry language
is building up, a swarm of dark, muted blood, waiting, yes,

listening for those nights I am still awakened
by the silence of three A.M.

I rouse the bedclothes or shake my head,
praying for the dry rustle of my hair,

the whisper rub of the sheets,
the blood noise of my ear

against a pillow, a shell, a stomach--does it matter?--
coming back to me as music.


To purchase or receive a copy, contact The Kent State University Press, Kent, Ohio, 44242, (www.bookmasters.com/ksu-press)









From Winter 2002:

Singing Without Knowing - Neil Diamente
Shoes in a Magazine - Radomir Luza Jr.
Running Up Spring Street - Maria McDonnell
Poets' Groove, #6 - S. Sebastian Petsu
Lollygagged and Flannel Flogged - Adam Watson





Singing Without Knowing

Neil Diamente

REDworks, 1999, $?.00

(I don't have a bio from Mr. Diamente. I received this copy from him in July 2K1, during a 'Beach Poets' Sunday afternoon open mic. I only saw him once after that before moving from Chicago. You may see a bio here later, but after this review, maybe not - Ed.)

And that's my first complaint, that there's no bio in the book for readers to learn anything about the author, nor is there any contact information on the author for those wishing to buy a copy the book (the printer's address is listed, strangely enough.)

Mr. Diamente's book has the strong stamp of years of stuffy literature classes. The poems have a dry, stiff, clunky feel. In many of them, he seems to reach for but not quite find the most effective words to convey the theme, or he doesn't take chances in the amount of emotion contained within them. In the first three poems, for example, he contemplates the moon, changes his mind and questions the poem posed, then insists on pursuing those metaphorical choices. A quote from the ancient poet Rumi on the same subject seems to settle the matter, but it struck me that this poem sparked the three pieces in the first place, and his poems didn't come off that well in comparison:


As you moon, wear the mask and shadow
Of our longing. But lo! To dance!
What makes you move moon,
Beautiful, beautiful moon?
For I know it is not I,
Not for my eye who sees beauty
And wants to describe it-
You care not for our words
For what I might say or reveal
Lying here, traveling without moving-

[from "Singing without Knowing"]

The moon has no desire to be described.
No one needs this poetry.
The loose-hair strands of a beautiful woman
don't have to be combed.

[from "Open Secret", Rumi]


Some of the poems are pseudo-profound philosophical musings, unfocused half-rants against society, jumbled religious poems using references only the poet knows. Some demonstrate why telling instead of showing is so clumsy. Many of the poems don't match their titles, where others are only too literal:



When I can't make sense
Out of my own senses so that the cloud
Embraces me, keeps me silent,
Or else feeling wrong about speaking-
Oh suffocating love!


[from "Suffocating Love"]


Mr. Diamente needs to pull more poetry from the gut and develop his own individual voice, not use the Canon as a crutch, and put his ass on the line and invest more emotion in the verses. More content, less adherence to form. Hopefully his next book will justify the obvious expense and tasteful layout of this effort.

I don't know if copies of this book are on sale in Chicago, but if you can't contact the author, write to:

Express Print
358 North Columbia
Frankfort, Indiana, 46041




Shoes in a Magazine

Radomir Luza Jr.

Pigling Bland Press, 2000, $5.00
ISBN 0-9643783-7-X



Radomir Luza Jr. is a poet/writer/actor/director/stand-up comedian who believes that an artist must entertain before he can inform. His work touches on philosophical and metaphysical topics, without straying from spirituality. Luza believes in awakening artists and non-artists alike from their non-creative slumber, and helping them to contribute generously and intelligently to the community. He has published seven books, two broadsides and over 100 poems in such journals and websites as Rouge Scholars.com, Poesy, Pegasus, The Aurorean, Cyber US, ZZZ Zyne, Spare Change, Poet Magazine and Papyrus. He has written eight plays, a number of comedy sketches, four novellas, and various newspapers and magazines have published over 300 of his articles. Luza was born in Vienna, Austria and raised in New Orleans, LA. He currently lives in the Journal Square section of Jersey City with Monica, his wife of three years and fellow artist and poet.

Luza dedicated these 'early years' poems to his new home, New York City, and I think it was a good move. They reflect the city, in ways beautiful and jarring, in particular the unique joining of metaphors I never would have imagined going together. The first time through, they stuck out like a sore thumb, but on a second read they got under my skin and had me laughing out loud and nodding in recognition, seeing what he was getting at, as in this poem on the rigamarole of criticism and analysis that sometimes completely misses the point:


wrong way baby

a plate of yellow, a bun of bread
poetry should come from the heart,
examine, do examine great poet,
tell me what's wrong,
line three doesn't have enough rhythm,
line twelve is too cliched,
I've seen line fourteen elsewhere,
I don't like the topic,
it's not visual enough,
can't you write with more flair, more substance,
I've seen it before, try something new,
stick me in the middle of a maze and probe me,
isn't that the answer,
isn't that the best way to get at the creator's head,
a refrigerator without butter, you can't touch my muse,
A dog with cholera you don't understand art,
you hope to get at the work by analyzing it,
ants without feet, you never will,
put my head on a tray and put it under glass,
I will be much harder to analyze than if I relaxed and was
myself,
A television without hair, what matters cannot be taught, cannot
be learned,
either you got it or you don't,
Place my head into a microwave,
I'll die, but I'll die without you knowing.


I'm a big fan of poetry that doesn't put technique or form between the reader and the poet, and these verses let you in, even when some of them ride the outer limits.

Luza is true to his word in poems that lay out what it means to him personally to be an actor, what chances you take and what it does to the gut; in inspirational words to the talented to have faith and trust; in a seemingly offhand poem about poetry that contains stark honesty ("bloody sunrise").

The love poems are intriguing as well - a past dream of 'what if' attempted in New York, better left as a dream; the adoration of a true Barry Manilow fan and a boy's unrequited love of football; a stark mantra of lost love where you'd swear you could hear the person speaking those lines to himself in realization:


I never thought I'd lose you
I never thought it would be my fault...

I never, my naked heart in torment, gave up on you, I gave up on me...

I never reached into your heart,
I never saw you for what you were, a scared puppy...

I never, a diamond in a farmer's hand, wanted anyone as much as you,
I never knew you wanted so much more.

[from "Brenda"]



A nice touch is the observation that these poems work on page as well as onstage in front of a mic, no easy feat. The 'quiet' poems are also refreshing:



SUNDAY AFTERNOON

Low willows hunch by the road.
Spot dog swishes flies.
Clanking pots and kitchen things in the distance.
Rust red pickup jumps past.
Driver washed out in the sun.
Old dust settles, slowly.



To purchase a copy, please contact the author at radluza@aol.com, or go to his website at http://members.aol.com/radluza.

You can contact the publisher at:

Pigling Bland Press
Langhhorne, Pennsylvania
215-750-1163





Running Up Spring Street

Maria McDonnell

Circle Publications, 2002, $7.00

ISBN 0-9721801-0-9



Maria McDonnell conducts Creative Writing workshops for students from kindergarten through grade 12. She is an officer on the board of directors for Berks Bards, a non-profit organization that - among other endeavors - runs a month-long poetry festival every April. Maria, a graduate student of literature, lives in Fleetwood, PA. with her husband and three sons. Running Up Spring Street is her first published collection.

Sweet, deceptively light and easy sliding from the page into my mind's eye, but very full of substance, McDonnell's poems are a real treat. None of her verses bear the burden that could so easily have been applied by a literature post-grad trying to show off. Clear moments of life realized in three dimensions, many of them quiet vignettes full of strong emotion:


She still looks like Olive Oyl in the mirror.
Or she cries dry and noiselessly into
the fat fat fat fat fat

    god, it's there
    i can't leave the house
    i can't live in all this flesh...

...The first swimsuit calendar you saw in your father's garage
The first time you saw Charlie's Angels
it was too late.

[from "Body Image"]


There are many love poems, romantic poems, pieces that made me envious and full of hope that that one great love affair is still within reach. These aren't blind devotionals, either - one anticipates sharing old age, another shares pizza and beer, the true rites of intimacy, another shares the newness of being a mother. A casual glance would judge these poems pleasant and sentimental, but there's years of living behind these words:


Summer Nights

Walking with you is best when it's warm
Taut calves & wilted T-shirt
Your waistband a halo around your hips,
held up by the sticky air

Straps span my shoulders, back, the tops of my feet
This cotton shift glows
gold around these shadow-gray curves
like a finger bone x-rayed by flashlight

Nearby, the boys halt
and run at at the elusive bug lights
beginning to strobe above the grass
The last effects of today's sun flter through your hair
casting stained glass jewel tones onto my cheeks

Heading back up Linden Street, following the breadcrumbs
of our scent
I remember the fleshy part just inside
your lower lip and long for home.


McDonnell includes a few other poems into the mix - homages to Margaret Atwood and Lucille Clifton; a touching remembrance of her mother getting a tattoo; spending a sunset on a beach that wouldn't bear any imprint of who was there; a spinster's bloom-is-gone lament; a humble saint; a horrible slut and bad mother; the desperate lonliness one finds in a bar; a subtle and funny tribute to Mary Tyler Moore:


Just between us girls: Murray
always seemed a little creepy
to me. I used to worry that he might stalk
you or something.
But I guess you could take care of yourself, huh?

[from "Dear Mary"]


This is a great first book. I really look forward to reading more from Maria McDonnell.

To purchase a copy, please contact:

Circle Publications
1325 South Cocalico Road
Denver, Pennsylvania 17517

or:

Highwire Press
173 Grandview Road
Wernersville, Pennsylvania 19565




Poets' Groove, #6

S. Sebastian Petsu

Self-Published, 2001

$1.00



S. Sebastian Petsu lives in a vegetarian cooperative house in Philadelphia, where he challenges car culture with his bicycle and works at a residence for the formerly homeless. He frequently travels to far off locations via Greyhound bus and sees Phil Lesh's band whenever possible. He continues to produce his self-published Poets' Groove series. The latest volume is #10: "8 Short Dances."

This particular volume, "The London Notebook", contains fiction and poetry written by Petsu between January and April of 2000 when he attended Birkbeck College, University of London and did some backpacking around Europe afterward.

The short story, "The Bride of Christ and I", about a young man's ups and downs with a friend who goes into a convent, is well written and nuanced. Petsu writes with the experience of one who spent his time in Catholic school, but the story isn't an anti-religious rant, it's a guy losing a girl and how it makes him feel and what he remembers of her. I liked not knowing how things ultimately worked out between them, no neatly resolved clichèd ending tacked on.

"Back Porch Recollections" is a mix of poetry, vignette and prose of time spent in a solitary writer's room, sometimes shared, sometimes a porous sanctuary.

There are just a few poems included in this volume, but I'd like to see more of his work.


Stratospheric Purgatory

Out the window
At 30,000 feet
There is only blue and white,
And the clouds melt into the horizon.
This is the place where you meet
Dead people in dreams

And this scene is only afforded,
Through the godless miracle
Of human flight,
Bound to earth
By physics equations, blueprints, and diagrams.


The last prose selection, "Manipulative Soundtrack Music", talks about the sounds that echo from inside your head, from countless Hollywood movies reverberating. It's funny and thoughtful.

Based on this installment of the series, Poets' Groove is well worth collecting, and hey, you can't beat the price.


Contact the author at Sebastianpetsu@yahoo.com.

(From the author: Copies of Poets' Groove are available for $1 each or a trade, so if you'd like to read more, don't hesitate to ask,...for $2 or a mix tape, I'll send you a 90 min. lofi audiocasstette of my poetry/spoken word...home recordings, live performances, basement jams...etc.

Snail mail:

4811 Springfield Ave.
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania 19143




Lollygagged and Flannel Flogged

Adam Watson

iUniverse.com, Writers Club Press, 2001, $10.95

ISBN 0-595-17495-7



Born in Kokomo, Indiana on February 7, 1974, Adam Watson lived in Las Vegas and Crete, Greece before moving with his mother to Louisville, Kentucky in 1981. His short play The Birdbath was performed at Bunbury Theatre in 1995. he is currently an English major at the University of Louisville. Lollygagged and Flannel Flogged is Adam's first published book.

The foreword of this cool book is alone worth the price. Mr. Watson's philosophy of poetry is one that I and most of my performance poetry friends from Chicago have expounded for years - that intentional obfuscation set to verse to demonstrate high intelligence and artistic originality is bullshit, that it shows utter contempt for the reading and listening audience. I've always said that a two minute poem that requires a five minute introduction is a piece of crap, that art that must be explained is next to worthless and such precious creators need to get over their elitist, over-educated asses. So what that they get more ink space than poets who communicate to the Reader instead of down to the Reader? In the grand scheme of things, poetry is still a minor player in the art world outside of academia...sorry, but, being a saloon poet, this is a favorite rant of mine. Anyway, Mr. Watson's book is a fine collection of eclectic intelligence, poems full of inspired twists of metaphor that aren't just clever to impress, cool insights that don't push their emotions at you either. The best poems never have to wield a sledge hammer, become anthems or rabble-rousing speeches (nothing wrong with anthems, they just aren't poems...)

There are too many great poems in Adam's book to do them all justice, so, to mention just a few: poems triggering your own memories of school, friends, funerals, particular mornings-after staring at strange faces; hilarious poems about poetry; the reality and raw grind of the touring troubador's life; an intelligently erotic tale of a lap dance, told from both sides:


...The first note sounds
The pistolshot for my performance to begin
a solo pianist
a solitary organist
playing Rachmaninoff on an underlit audience
of one.
I begin with a body drag down his face and belly
a bare nipple-prick against denimed crotch
an oscillation of flesh while looking up
Into the meek mad eyes of one-sided desire
Then a rearwards straddle, leaning back against his chest
my head on his shoulder
my grind becoming insistent and coarse
as I feel the familiar urgency begin to build
Now I face him, my mouth close to his ear
Spraying warm breath, the softest of moans
Yet he is beyond hearing me now
As I see his eyelids gnashed and clenched
Lips lost in wink tic grimace
With a last undulation of hara-kiri heaves
I finish the song and the supplicant...

I leave the Trick-Me-Club
Sitting in my car seat
Windows down, in the dank August night
The air is stopped, fan is stuck in dashboard complacency.

In the neon glow of overhead signage
I smoke, blowing exhales down my chest
Trying to expunge the Lysistrata scent
She lingers there, in the folds of cotton and cerebrum lobes
A diamond spindled needle fingering the same phono
groove

while the dampness dries
I smoke
I wonder.

[from "Mikado Epiphany"]


The one-liners scattered throughout are gems:




      You can't calendar creativity
              Anymore than you can
                 Organize an orgasm 

Bud Wiser

I wish they made Love Dry
So when it was over, there would be no aftertaste.


The photos in the book, by Douglas Staley, are an excellent complement to the poems in the book; not there to illustrate any of the pieces, but as poems in their own right, sparking introspection in concert with Adam's words. Mr. Staley lives in Louisville and is currently working on an Arts degree. This is the first time his photos have been published.

This is a great book of verse, let alone being Adam's first. I look forward to reading, and hearing, his poetry in the future. Here's one last sample for the road:


Intoxicate me with mint julep eyes!
Make me drunk with your kahlua thighs
And let me sip, with sangria lips
The moonshine from your hips...

[from "The Wine That Leaks"]


To purchase a copy, please contact the publisher at:

iUniverse.com, Inc.
5220 South 16th, Ste. 200
Lincoln, Nebraska 68512
www.iuniverse.com.

You can reach the author at www.adamwatson.org.