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City Table Review Archive


From the fall of 1999 to the winter of 2002, I published the poetry chapbook review zine CTR. The idea for the zine came from a conversation I had with Chicago poet and Puddin'head Press publisher Dave Gecic during the 1999 Printers Row Book Fair. Poets often make chapbooks that never get reviewed or taken seriously - that's why I started the zine. Even though it had a short run, it's still a good idea, so I'm continuing to write chapbook reviews on a limited basis for the "Newstuff" page.

Anyway, the complete collection of short reviews haven't been available since 2K2, so I'm bringing them here. 'Nuff said.

This page:

Fall 1999:

Diary of The Red Inkwell - Edith A. Giles
Party Calvin's Freedom, Frolic and Fun Poetry Book - Calvin Glaze
Quiet Sulfur Nights - John Martinez
Rosedust - Larry Winfield

Winter 1999:

Can I Hang? - Tara Betts
Conversations With Friendly Demons and Tainted Saints - Nina Corwin
Mindclock Lubricant - Steven Glabman
Lady Rutherfurd's Cauliflower - JJ Jameson
Growth - Maria McCray
Professional Cemetary - Johnny Masiulewicz

Spring 2000:

shortness of breath - Charles Bernstein
I'm Not Your Bitch (the extended remixes) - Joanna Marshall
Prophecies - Lawrence Tyler
Dragon Lady: Tsukimi - Martha Modena Vertrease

Archive page 2

Summer 2000:

Thaw - Noam Paco Gaster
Scandalous - Edith A. Giles
An Invitation, poems by Susanna Lang
possibilities, a book of poems by Karen Stockwell

Winter 2000:

On an Irish Country Road - Daniel Cleary
The Demented Kewpie Doll's Manifesto - Kate Cullan
Plainfield Follies - Lee Kitzis
Thought Bombs #12

Spring 2001:

Bucket of Questions - Chuck Perkins
Israel To Prague Poems - Lee Kitzis
Erzulie - Larry Winfield

Summer 2001:

Starwallpaper 10th Neutral Turf Anthology - Edited by Kim Berez
The Journal of Ordinary Thought - Edited by Deborah Epstein
Storms Beneath the Skin - Regie Gibson
Big Pen - Edited by Lee Kitzis

Archive page 3

Summer 2002:

The Peacock's Eye - Robert Klein Engler
Penetration - Steven M Glabman
Just Mackin' at You - Love Poems by Party Calvin and Friends
Lot Of My Sister - Alison Stine

Winter 2002:

Singing Without Knowing - Neil Diamente
Shoes in a Magazine - Radomir Luza Jr.
Running Up Spring Street - Maria McDonnell
Poets' Groove, #6 - S. Sebastian Petsu
Lollygagged and Flannel Flogged - Adam Watson





From Fall 1999:

Diary of The Red Inkwell - Edith A. Giles
Party Calvin's Freedom, Frolic and Fun Poetry Book - Calvin Glaze
Quiet Sulfur Nights - John Martinez



Diary of The Red Inkwell, Edith A Giles

1999, Self-Published


As a child, Edith Giles used to make clothes for her dolls and write stories about her life. As an adult, she earned a B.A. in Fashion Design from the International Academy of Merchandizing and Design in 1997. She began writing poetry in December 1995 when she debuted in the open mic at lit-X when it was in Wicker Pk.
This is her first book.

"The Diary of the Red Inkwell" is made up of four sections - an introduction, the everyday life of a poet, the issues we all contend with, and personal issues that Edith says formed the core of her emotional personality. Her book is a self-portrait, an affirmation, and a tribute to those who have inspired and helped her along.

Her no-nonsense poems tackle their subjects head-on, whether it's accusations of male-bashing:


"If the shoe fits, wear it, boy"


blasting rude cabbies, exposing trifling ex-lovers ("You and You - David and Adam") or dealing with past sexual abuse:


It took me 7 years to finally tell
my mother EVERYTHING that had happened...
I may not have been his first victim,
but I know that I wasn't his last;
and that really hurts me.


Edith is plain-spoken and straightforward where many other poets aim for technical slickness or a dazzling turn of phrase. This is an excellent first book from a writer with a strong voice.





Party Calvin's Freedom Frolic and Fun Poetry Book, Calvin Glaze

1999, Poet Star Promotions


Calvin Glaze comes from LA. I've seen him read almost everywhere on the poetry scene, adding his exuberance to the mix.

This book is huge and full of life. Calvin says it's a children's book for adults - "poetry with a smile, a wink, a touch of whimsy, that encourages you to disengage from the clutter of life and not take yourself so serious." The only thing missing is a coloring section.

Dance and movement help to set the book's tone through the vibrant images scattered within, a complement to the poems that dance and celebrate, as in the three-part piece "Warrior Thoughts":


I speak with excitement, joy
anger, instruction, faith.
Feeling As If There's Hope

I write, as if things
mattered--as if someone
was listening........?


There are tributes to sisterhood (and Tara Betts), guest appearances by Reggie Gibson and Michael Warr, and a tale of Calvin's attending Sterling Plumpp's poetry workshop. Quotes from the likes of Pablo Neruda, Cinque and Marcus Garvey are sprinkled throughout. I found many smiles, along with more thoughtful moments in Calvin's book. it's a wonderful antidote to dry, pedantic verse.





Quiet Sulphur Nights, John Martinez

1999, Self-Published


John Martinez was born on Chicago's South East side. He's been reading for over ten years at open mics locally and across the country, and he's hosted readings at three poetry venues.
This is his third book ("my first real book", he says).

These are the most intense and personal poems I've ever seen from John, with vulnerabitities laid bare and secrets exposed.
The title poem is a remembrance of a childhood spent among the steel mills, seeing an uncle, one of the workers, as near gods:


I can still remember singe marks on his work coat from droplets of white-hot
iron, as if they'd leapt on him in some kind of angry defiance
And you could tell in his eyes the way he told his stories he loved his job
He'd say, 'Well, when we go in at night, we're like hellfire gods'
When I grew up, I knew I wanted to be a steelworker too



then returning to find the skies clear and cold, the mills dead.

"Brown Out" is a meditation of color-consciousness and the difference between what you're told you look like and how you appear. There are family episodes, teenage misadventures, a search for personal identity and musings over lost love within the pages of this book.

In the first reading, I had the impression that John was being too defensive in some poems in the middle section, straying into the hated territory of 'whiny poet', but after reading through the book and taking the poems as a whole I realized that he was purposely leading me through the state of mind we all find ourselves in sometimes, in the pre-dawn, when we're too drunk or not drunk enough, with only ourselves to confront and confide in.

One of the last poems, "Six Thirty P.M., June 30, 1999", is an excellent closure to the book. It feels like the end of a journey, a resolution echoed in watching the day end from a car:


Staring at the swirling unfinished canvas of God.





Rosedust, Larry Winfield

1999, 12.23 Press


Reviewed by John Martinez


"Rosedust" is chapbook size, only 28 pages, but in them Larry expands the mind beyond any 28 pages I've read in a while. He is thoughtful, insightful, and tries to let the reader know there is more to him than poetry. His book is interspersed with not only poetry, but short stories. Right now I'm going to highlight three of his selections, and if and when you pick a copy of his book up, i hope you'll like them.

In the title story "Rosedust" we read not so much a story, but an explanation for an existence of the lead character's being. She was once a human, and through her death she becomes an angel, and is sent back to earth to assist others. I shouldn't give away too much more, because you'll like the ending. I first read this story on Larry's website back in the winter of 1998, and it is still just as effecting and powerful as it is now.

The poem "A.G." in my opinion, is right on the money. There are poets out there we haven't heard from yet, and one day they're going to get up on stage and blow us all away, and yet we worry about our supposed icons like Allen G., among others, and whether they slept on this side of the bed or not in the ENDLESS biographies written about these folks. However, we know virtually nothing about our neighbors on the scene outside of sitting together for a few hours at a dimly lit venue.

In "venues past", we are actually seeing a parade. Instead of elephants, though, we watch the sad parade of dead poetry venues, those killed off by economics, lack of attendance, or whatever. He names names, too, referencing bars and cafes on the far north side, to even my old one in Bridgeport. This poem is straight from the heart, and it is true what he mentions at the ending of this particular poem. If we don't support the poetry scene out there somewhere, his lists will get bigger.

I have no college degrees and I will not attempt to bore you into apoplexy with some inane justifications as to why or why not you should read this. However, I know well-written, thought-out verse when I read it, and this is the real deal. Larry has made a valiant effort with the space he has been given, and if I were you, I would search him out and get a copy of this book. I am not glomming on him because this criticism is in his magazine. This is a damn good chapbook of poems and stories and he deserves it, pure and simple.






From Winter 1999:

Can I Hang? - Tara Betts
Conversations With Friendly Demons and Tainted Saints - Nina Corwin
Mindclock Lubricant - Steven Glabman
Lady Rutherfurd's Cauliflower - JJ Jameson
Growth - Maria McCray
Professional Cemetary - Johnny Masiulewicz





Can I Hang?

Tara Betts

1999, Self-Published

Tara Betts has been writing and teaching in Chicago for a number of years. Published in both national and local magazines and journals, she was a member of the '99 MadBar team at the Nat'l Poetry Slam and received the '99 Gwendolyn Brooks Open Mic Award. I've never seen Tara give a bad reading.

The title poem is the direct answer to a question asked, "can you handle me being your man?" The answer becomes a declaration of love past time, past history:


I knew I could hang when I saw strangers come in
snatch him from me
tell me lovin him / was heathenish
then push into me with their civilization
again and again
Throughout all this,
his countenance was etched in my brain
sketched into my scars
raised like the brand on my back.
He wants to know if I can hang?


Other poems evoke the physical as spiritual ("Loving You is Church"); a pause to take in that moment between the urge, the intent and the contact of a first kiss; how lovers from the past never truly leave us.

Tara pays her respects to the past in hard meditations on the roots of rock, in picking up fragments of bracelets and necklaces on the beach that holds the memories of nations swept here, in remembrance of a Memphis atrocity a century old, as old as last week in the land of the free...

The last piece is an excellent poet's declaration, relayed with love:


We....
Become driftwood floating through language...
Pruning dead phrases so poems live




Conversations With Friendly Demons and Tainted Saints

Nina Corwin

1999, Puddin'head Press



Nina Corwin is a poet and psychotherapist with a national reputation for her work on behalf of victims of violence. She has been featured at poetry events and radio programs across North America and is the producer of poetry ensemble pieces such as Odes on The Whimsy of Gender.

Originally conceived as an ensemble performance piece, most of the themed poems in the book take a probing look at mythological figures and other heroes. Nina views them (God, Zeus, psychologists, for example) as mere self-important, ineffectual males who continue to oppress the women who have to deal with them - Eve talking back to God; Daphne defying her father and paying dearly; Orpheus chided for his lack of absolute trust, etc. Before dismissing these poems as a PC feminist treatise, though, read them. She has a point:


When you carved us in your image
did you expect a mindless clone?
And with the biggest sack of magic tricks
protected for your own
Would you also have us grovel
in the shadow of your throne?


Other poems that flesh out the book covers subject like the Viet Nam quagmire, a golf course built on sacred Native American land and an episode in youth dealing with the everyday bigotry inside a cabbie hangout.

While some of the poems seem to miss a beat outside of a performance setting, this is still an impressive collection of works. I look forward to Nina's next book.





Mindclock Lubricant

Steven Glabman

1998, One Day Productions 020



Steven Glabman is a writer and visual artist, an insightful creator of visual anarchy as well as a charter member of the Unofficial Soup Kitchen, a global cyber-commune (his discussion forum there is called "There's A Garden In My Face"). He has been regularly featured at the Around the Coyote arts festival and his work has graced walls and screens at home and abroad.

"Mindclock Lubricant" is a limited edition 100 print book, beautifully laid out and designed by Mr. Glabman. It's a melding of color, form and metaphor, an art book worthy of the term.

The words are characters in their own right, sparking separate reactions within the poems, many of which are stream of consciousness duets with the reader having to wrap his or her imagination around multiple meanings suggested by the form of the lines - you can hear the voice (is it yours or Steven's) floating up from the page.

Among the poems:
the juxposition of donut holes, time shifts and stepping on an eggshell day; a meditation of space in all its forms; the biography of a fire related in frozen living color; seeing tribal spacemen dancing at a cosmic 'burning man'...

The title poem on the last page is an encapsulation of the life of the subconscious at play:


Unofficially locked in longing for the past,
lost on a moment when the plausible happens and you see
yourself dripping into yourself, liquid and full of
change. The grease of memory, like passion
holds the attention of one's hope.
for now it's the Mindclock
Lubricant that
keeps the faith,
keeps the focus.




Lady Rutherford's Cauliflower

JJ Jameson

1999, Puddin'head Press



JJ Jameson is a longtime fixture on the local scene, a saloon poet in the finest tradition who strives to keep his work true, and doesn't hesitate to point out artistic laziness or pretension. Currently he hosts a monthly set at Cafe Aloha with Kurt Heintz.

Many of the poems seem to hinge on relationships, the kind we develop and the ones we're stuck with, whether that applies to lovers, friends, Frango mints, our muses or our pets.

For example, "Lawn Mower" introduces us to the Lady Rutherfurd and her need for the appearance of order, but not for him. In another poem JJ muses on the succesful pursuit - we meet, we seduce, we wake up, we may or may not make a clean getaway or a lasting impression, and it's still not enough. There are bittersweet love poems, non-dysfunctional sex poems, and a remembrance of his parents, and the things they never said (around him...).

Poets are another part of the weave of relationships found in the book:


Walt challenged.
He knew that if, indeed, there were a god,
why god would have to shit, too,
just like he had to.
Some of today's performance poets shit too.


JJ dedicated his book to the memory of Frank Bonomo and Jim Cummings; the tribute poems that are included ( "The Floor of My Apartment is a Polish Stew" and "Jim" ) brought back my own fond memories with them, at venues and that rooftop full moon birthday party.

The Author's Afterword that concludes the book is an excellent essay on differences between 'written' and 'performance' texts. One more example of JJ keeping it real.





Growth

Maria McCray

1999, Self-Published



Maria McCray is an actor, director, a teacher of poetry, conflict resolution and theatre improvisation, a Vietnam Vet and proud mother of three great kids. She has represented Chicago for four consecutive years as a member of the Slam Team at the Nationals.

"Growth" is a full-sized explosion of color, with picture poems, photos, family portraits and deeply personal offerings that give you a real sense of the complexity of Maria the person and how she got here.

Her life is here - her history, personal and universal, memories of the not-so-old South, memories of her godmother, her grandmother (both representing complete and separate worlds, one Japanese, one Filipino), her parents, her children, her time in 'Nam (and what the military does to you in the name of service, and reclaiming your humanity, even on a battlefield). In the book she watches her son survive a drive-by, remembers cradling him as a baby knowing that he wouldn't stay that safe and protected:

I proudly watch you as you grow & berate biology & nature
& drown in worries...
...I wish, I wish I could rewind you, like the VCR, back, back,
to bygone, halcyon, pamper, diaper days...
...I have no other viable excuse. I am, after all, just another
worried mother


Her present is well represented by poems that scream current events, that ask where do all the old men go, that sing loud and clear 'what women want', poems that explore thoughts swirling while lying prone, when you're not quite in love.

The book ends, fittingly, with a love poem to her current paramour. It's not full circle - just another milestone on her path...




Professional Cemetary

Johnny Masiulewicz

1997, Puddin'head Press



Johnny Masiulewicz is a Chicago-bred writer, poet and journalist. His work has appeared in numerous periodicals and anthologies, including the Chgo Tribune, Strong Coffee, the Reader, NewCity, Indelible Ink, Barfly, U-Direct and Treasured Poems of America, and in the screenplays for the films Freedom Blues & Pale Horse. He and his wife divide their time between Chicago and Jacksonville, Fla.

Mr.Masiulewicz's book is a collection of poetry and short prose. Many of the poems, struck me as hard to decipher or incomplete - is the title poem a lover tenderly saying goodbye, or putting things to an end? Is "Sun Voodoo" about an unattainable beauty or a flasher? Is "Frog Envy" about jealousy or just a metaphorical observation of nature?

The poems that work are the pieces that take a nursery rhyme approach to episodes such as being mugged and shot in an alley
( "pushcart" ), or the very short ones ( "the chair" ):


ravaged by subscrip-
tion to its sole purpose, its
slats and seat shattered, the chair whimpers from the junk-
pile, "too fat, too fat"


The prose, however, is wonderful - "initiation" is a slice of young city life, relating what ones does to belong, and is willing to do to others; "callous-hand man" is an excellent character study of a solid city type; "the mixology game" is a crackling account of a checkers match waged in Bughouse Square; "fingernails" relates an adult encounter that doesn't fall victim to mere bar pickup cliché.

Each short story is a gem - concise, textured and fully realized. Give the poems an extra read, though - they'll provide a workout for your imagination.








From Spring 2000:

shortness of breath - Charles Bernstein
I'm Not Your Bitch (the extended remixes) - Joanna Marshall
Prophecies - Lawrence Tyler
Dragon Lady: Tsukimi - Martha Modena Vertrease





shortness of breath

Charles Bernstein

1997, Protest

Charles Bernstein is a poet/fiction writer/journalist and has been pursuing his craft since 1976. From 1986 to 1991 he published the fanzine cops hate poetry. Currently, he conducts a regular poetry workshop in Evanston with Michael Brownstein.

This is a beautiful little book - stark pages housing perfect moments in time, almost Zen-like; the first time a couple really sees each other, or a two-second observation made in the rush of the day, or this:


blind spot

frozen like a lens
that forgets to click
long after
the portrait
has been taken


Some of the poems look like errant stones in a rock garden, adding to their depth.

The longer poems I liked as well: 'deathbeds slept in just once' pulled me into it's gloom without being whiny, very cool. 'final notes' is funny and profound, examining an instance when the writer in us questions our existance, our lives as writers.

In the forward Charles is asked 'what is shortness of breath?,' by a little old man. He responds, 'it is the shallowness of thought, the laziness of the sun in the late afternoons, a child's restlessness before dinner, the sweetness shared between couples kissing each other for the first time, a baby's first gulp of air and the uttterance of words in less than four seconds.' 'aaahhh,' the little old man remarked, as he slowly stumbled away. I couldn't have said it better.




I'm Not Your Bitch

Joanna Marshall

1998-99, Scars Publications & Design




Joanna Marshall is a third decante Virgo who is a loud Jewish American princess. She has a tendency to be hyperactive so she stays away from sugar. She loves leopard print. When she grows up she wants to be a mermaid.

The title of the book sets a theme in many of her poems - she honestly explores woman as modern archetype, clay feet included. Sometimes living wild on the razor-thin edge of life, sometimes being caught immediately after sex, sometimes running the public guantlet of whistles, leers and come-ons that hides an implied threat, and sometimes, reacting to the abuse and betrayl of feminist history committed by some women:


You've come a long way baby
So it's okay to co-opt radical stances
and be a willing participant in your own objectification
I mean isn't that what art is all about
GETTING
ATTENTION


Among her other, more personal poems are episodes of powerful romances that burn fast, daydreams of being touched, the sensation of reaching out across the gulf of a broken friendship, or feeling your life is an asylum and you're trapped inside. She also celebrates the sisterhood legacy that reaches back to Lillith's defiance of patriarchy:


I've got the blood of Lillith, Jezebel, Queen Vashti
and the Whore of Babylon in my veins
I will leave the garden of earthly delights
and just like Lillith
I'll say good bye
to the snake.





Prophecies

Lawrence Tyler

1990, Puddin'head Press




Lawrence Tyler was born on the west side of Chicago and has lived in and around the city all his life. He is a Loyola graduate and a veteran of the Army. 'Poetry chose me,' he says, 'at about age sixteen; I chose poetry 'round twenty. No complaints.'

Prophecies is a poetic epic in three movements, conveyed through the voice of the hero (or is it anti-hero? I'm not sure):

'History 308: The America' introduces you to a famous physicist pursuing a more perfect mind, seeking happiness, as a future without hope bears down upon him. In death, he dreams of meeting the future and no one's there waiting for him...

The second part finds the scientist revived 400 years later, thawed out into a world run by artists and scientists, a paradise where space travel is common and mind to mind communication is standard. It's the future he hoped for, but he's suspicious of it and especially doesn't like sharing his thoughts. He tells everyone his name is Kilroy, he becomes a historical artifact in exchange for pilot training to fly to the stars. He ends up in a lawless port called Midway where he discovers he has a talent for empathic assassination due to the emptiness of his soul. He begins killing assassins and an empathic master is dispatched to try to curb his activity, to help him confront the anger, the old comfortable hole eating away at him, but it's too much a part of him. He confounds the master, escapes, and pilots his ship into oblivion.

In 'Prophecies: A dialogue with God', I heard what was almost a lover's lament to God, who never answers until now. This section turned a bit strange - verbal cat and mouse sessions with himself, with a woman who smiles at him, with God, becoming, I think, either a third chance at life with a mission to find God in the faces of humanity, or the scientist waking up from a wild dream. I liked the uncertainty of this ending; does Kilroy find heaven, or heaven in a woman's smile... And has he learned anything?

Epic poems are very difficult to write well; this is a great first effort from Mr. Tyler.




Dragon Lady: Tsukimi

Martha Modena Vertrease

1999, Riverstone




Martha Modena Vertreace is a distinguished professor of English and poet-in-residence at Kennedy-King College. She has been Poetry Fellow at the Hawthornden Int'l Writers' Retreat in Scotland, St. Deiniol's Library in Hawarden, Wales and the Writers Center in Dublin, Ireland. She lives in Chicago with her cats Beastie, Bon-Bon, and Morrigan.

Ms. Vertreace's book was published in conjunction with winning the 1999 Riverstone Poetry Chapbook Award. It has a wonderful mix of vignettes, dreams and the mythological interacting subtly within lives - 'Creating Space with Light' is a meditation with a lover or friend melding with impressions of the mystic connection between them; 'Dragon Lady' reads like idle, offhand thoughts woven into the body of a daydream of recognizing the heart of your own mythology, what shape it takes, and becoming it; 'Tantric Dream' has beautiful images of organic eroticism; 'Tsukimi' concerns a sacred ritual - the poem reminded me of the effect I felt during the double blue moons of last year:


Her hawk's feather pulls threads of smoke
over breasts, arms, faces
to make ourselves whole for tsukimi, she calls it -
moon viewing - as we stand
in a yellow pool of cool light, as soot clings
to our coats, cheeks,
the white streak in her loose braid.
you must leave the path to find it,


Martha has a lovely, understated touch with her love poems, even when comparing an artist's passion for epiphany to her passion for the artist to the creation of a mandala, as in 'A Grain of Sand'. The pieces have more going on than a single intention; real life details and asides float through. In 'Pegasus Standing among Ladybugs' the chrome equine sculpture at Clark and Winnemac opens a love poem to a carpenter that includes a bit of Virgin Mary lore that made me smile.

My only quibble concerns the layout of stanzas in some of the poems. The printed structure - in 'Dragon Lady', for example - tended to interfere with the natural flow of the words. It doesn't detract from the crafted poems within, though.

Ms. Vertreace has a pleasant straightforward performance voice, one I've often enjoyed at venue readings. I look forward to reading her next book.